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She
Contributed by
Always
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:46:33 PM in AEST
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The whole world,
All of the thoughts,
And all of the dreams,
All end up with one girl,
At least it's that way for me.
I've tried to look forward,
I've tried to keep my thoughts clear.
But here I am still,
Emotion and thought,
Pouring out of me with one accord.
Loneliness, to close, I have realized my fear.
Just to open my eyes, takes great will.
Her voice, that of every song,
Her face, the multitude of crowds,
Her thoughts, represented in the throng.
And the result,
Me on bended knee,
No more am I too proud.
She has taken over my soul,
She has taken over my mind,
She is the influence in every moment,
Eternal through-out all time.
At least for me, this is what I find.
Copyright ©
Always
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2004-07-16 20:46:33]
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Re: She
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:20:19 PM AEST
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wow, you got it bad. great write.
the voice
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Re: She
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:54:40 PM AEST
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beautifully written, sooo sweet, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: She
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:12:01 PM AEST
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| Pretty Cool Write |
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Re: She
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:31:21 AM AEST
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A very long time ago, someone wrote a poem for me entitled "She". I still have it. I absolutely treasure it and the memories wrapped around it. If you haven't already done so... GIVE THIS TO HER - I promise she will never forget it - or you.
Welcome to YPDC... I'm looking forward to reading more of your work! Thank you for sharing this - it brought me back in time and made my heart beat a bit faster than norm. *sigh*
SNM
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