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Cold Fire
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:07:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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ending pains evil rein
waliking out of darkness into the light
destroying torure
doing what is right
easing the wounds
no more will icause myself to bleed
throw away the razors
throw away the knifes
i wont need them anymore
im ending my life
forget about drugs
forget about cigarettes
the only addiction i now need
is the addiction to death
the angel of death is standing beside the freezing fire
it says to walk through if its death i desire
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Re: Cold Fire
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:44:18 PM AEST
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Very sad.
I pray this is just a write.
Very moving write.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy |
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Re: Cold Fire
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:02:42 PM AEST
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| i agree with emy. what are you willing to let control you? |
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Re: Cold Fire
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by waos on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:10:17 PM AEST
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| *hugs* it's a good write. my favorite line was "the angel of death is standing beside the freezing fire". i know how it feels to feel all that. or at least somewhat what it feels. but know that you aren't alone. there are so many of us who feel that too, and so many of us aren't giving up. don't give up either. let's stay strong and alive for each other. |
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Re: Cold Fire
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by Stoney1 on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:18:02 AM AEST
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If you were to clean up the distracting
spelling errors, it would read better.
Stoney |
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Re: Cold Fire
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:27:46 PM AEST
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| nice flow i like the desiggn of the poem its good i like the words u used also i,d give it a five star i like it short but sweet xxgripxx hav u got msn ? |
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Re: Cold Fire
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by flamingblade on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:41:24 PM AEST
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i like it
it's dark, and sad too
once again you've done it
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