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Tender
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:03:33 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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I want to feel tender
I dont want to be so numb
My wish is to be soft but not so torn
No matter how much i say i hate it
I want to be loved
I want to be tender to anothers touch
My heart of glass is against others hearts of steel
And i hate the fact thet my heart is glass
I dont want to be fragile
I just want to be tender
Hurtable but loveable
I just dont like to be completely breakable
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2004-07-16 20:03:33]
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Re: Tender
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:48:12 PM AEST
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Very good work of art here.
This is a clasic masterpeice.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Tender
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:04:32 PM AEST
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| strong. very nice. |
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Re: Tender
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:38:53 PM AEST
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love it.can relate. spectacular job. especialy on this line:
"I just dont like to be completely breakable"
keep writing. |
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