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Fatal Words
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:58:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I want to be in your arms
but i fear someday you may utter those three fatal words
if i feel those fatal words in return it will only complete the curse
those words were not meant to be spread for happieness
they are meant to spread pain
those words were not created by God
they were created by Satan
If you ever plan on saying those words be ready to expiriance the raw face of hate
those three fatal words have already caused a part of me to die
three simple fatal words
I LOVE YOU
those vicious words
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brokensoul
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2004-07-16 19:58:43]
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Re: Fatal Words
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by waos on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:14:09 PM AEST
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| definitely a different perspective on those words. but it can be really true. i hadn't thought about it much before, but reading this shows how true it an be in my life. good job writing this. |
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Re: Fatal Words
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:13:36 PM AEST
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This poem is soo true...anytime those words have been told to me it has ended badly...and i know it hurts....this is really a great write...good job
Lots of Love
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