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Real Living
Contributed by
MLCstar
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:04:25 PM in AEST
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Down upon the floor above
We can see it shining.
As you take your deep breath
While stepping off the edge.
You’re always expecting to fall
But instead you are floating.
As you wake up from your dream you know
That none of this is real.
Why can’t we see?
Why can’t we see?
Why can’t we see?
The truth surrounds us.
As hard as I try to realize
The hope in why we’re living.
I see that I should just give up
And re-learn how to live.
Cause why should we give in so much
To the wrong things we are doing.
When we’ll all feel so much better
When we do what is right.
Why can’t we see?
Why can’t we see?
Why can’t we see?
The truth surrounds us.
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MLCstar
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Re: Real Living
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by 6_2 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:13:57 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Real Living
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:23:16 PM AEST
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wonderful poem good job
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Re: Real Living
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:06:03 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really good. I enjoyed it a lot, thanks so much for sharing! : )
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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Re: Real Living
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:34:39 PM AEST
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| wow good poem/song. even though i dont know the tune i think you did an awesome job with the lyrics. |
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Re: Real Living
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:08:17 AM AEST
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this is beautiful, i love your intro,"Down upon the floor above/We can see it shining.":) hugs n' love nessa
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