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How I Really Feel
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 06:47:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Confused because I ache for you when I want to drift apart
I want to drift apart because I’d rather not hurt you again
I’d rather not hurt you again but someday it’s all going to end
It’s all going to end and we’re going to move on
We’re going to move on because we’re only sixteen
We’re only sixteen and that’s not old enough
That’s not old enough to make an everlasting decision
To make an everlasting decision you’ve got to live a full life
To live a full life you’ve got to live in the real world
The real world is not this petty, childish, almost surreal life which we call high school
Life which we call high school is too melodramatic
Too melodramatic and it causes me distasteful pain and headaches
Pain and headaches are how I really feel
How I really feel is confused
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2004-07-16 18:47:07]
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Re: How I Really Feel
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by 6_2 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:14:50 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: How I Really Feel
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:33:15 PM AEST
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kinda sad but good write
Brandy |
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Re: How I Really Feel
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by buccaneer on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:01:14 PM AEST
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i hope you make up cause it bad to lose love when it's sweet to have it.
maybe he will understand better i mean all the men out there.sorry but i always relate the writer and the poet together |
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Re: How I Really Feel
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by lifefliesby on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:35:37 PM AEST
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... now don't say I WOULDn't like it... I do
anytime you express your ideas is good
I realize all this too... it's ok
I love you know. And I know I will... no matter what happens.
great write babe...
keep em up, ur great
~Jared J.~ |
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Re: How I Really Feel
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:55:14 PM AEST
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Well I met a guy at 15 married him and was with him for 20 years, so never say it won't last. Sometimes our hearts can stand the test of time! Good luck to you and ummm...
Jared! 0 :-)
angel always ...joni |
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