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Hello Stranger
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 06:12:41 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Gems sparkle
In the core of my eyes
A core that was once dead,
Now dances alive.
A smile slowly forms
As my reflection stares back,
Eyes not drowning in tears,
Of cold hard black.
My eyes now declare
Freedom of acceptance,
Shine like a precious parable,
A prestigious star,
Like candy coated jewels
of hidden knowledge
A moment I want to keep
Before my heart breaks down
And so sadly weeps.
But what is this in my eyes?
What can this be?
Could it be that something I’ve
Longed for?
…to recognize the stranger in me?
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
... [
2004-07-16 18:12:41]
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Re: Hello Stranger
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:39:27 PM AEST
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Well this has left me as your name states...breathless.An emotive write I can relate to quite easily.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Hello Stranger
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 07:45:43 PM AEST
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wow and wow, greatly awesome poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Hello Stranger
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:01:16 PM AEST
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| I feel you on this one. |
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