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Never Cry Again
Contributed by
heather19821982
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 05:06:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I begged but no response.
I bleed but no help.
I cried but
you turned your head,
and stabbed me again.
I tried but nothing
is good enough.
I whine but you never listen.
I hate because of you.
And now that your lying
in the puddle of red sap
that sprung from your
monsterous soul,
now that you will never
steal the same clean air as I,
And now that your every limb
can no longer beat me
so that I only have
seconds to my own horrible sleep,
I beg for my innocence.
I wash my blood stained hands.
I morn over bending my good kitchen knife
in your stone cold heart.
AND I will never cry again
Copyright ©
heather19821982
... [
2004-07-16 17:06:19]
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Re: Never Cry Again
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by white_rain_angel on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 05:17:52 PM AEST
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| Wow thats a very deep poem, but its a good one. i hope i continue to read more |
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Re: Never Cry Again
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 05:49:00 PM AEST
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ooooh very good and very dark. I liked the image of bending your knife on his stone cold heart. very good analogy or w/e u wanna call it.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Never Cry Again
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by waos on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:27:51 PM AEST
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| that's not bad at all. i liked it. and i can relate to some of it too. |
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Re: Never Cry Again
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:15:31 PM AEST
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This is a very deep and dark poem. I enjoyed it a lot, even though it is putting some scary images inside my head. It's amazing how many things I can see with just these words. Well done, keep up the good work.
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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Re: Never Cry Again
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 03:17:57 AM AEST
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| YES!!!! |
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