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A day of Suicide
Contributed by
DeLeriousTearZ
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:47:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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This is something
I really need to do
Every time i attempt
Its always falling through
Half my mind keeps asking
"What way is best for me"
While the other half is begging
Joanna, please don't leave
so this time i'm gonna do it
I won't contemplate my thoughts
i'll get them out of my mind
so they're not sitting there to rot
Around noon time
I'm lying on the floor
Tears are running down my cheeks
Police are at the door
60 seconds passes by
theres a siren in my ear
as 4 paramedics
tell me "kid, hang in there"
Within 5 minutes
i'm lying in the ER
One doctor pumps my stomach
While the other stitches up my arm
8 hours after that
I woke up and saw what I've done
Only to find myself alive
How come I'm not gone?
A half hour elapses
People flood my room
I look up at their faces
Each one full of gloom
There was preaching and questioning
For atleast an hour straight
And when they asked me for all these answers
I told them, 'it was getting late'
My friend wanted to stay with me
I told her just to go
I told her I would see her in the morning
I wanted to be alone.
It was nearly midnight
When that thought had struck my mind
"I know what your thinking" it said
"Come on give it another try"
I walked over to the window sill
pulled aside the blinds
pushed out the screen
Angels watch me fly.
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DeLeriousTearZ
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2004-07-16 16:47:26]
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Re: A day of Suicide
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by white_rain_angel on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 05:03:30 PM AEST
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| Wow thats a really great poem, my friends, son's dad just commited suicide, i've never tried it, Just wondered what goes through peoples minds in the last few moments. anyways great poem, hope to hear more |
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Re: A day of Suicide
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 05:04:27 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was a great poem.. I really liked it. How did the paramedics find out? Sorry... I've attempted 3 times... curiosity killed the cat... But I really loved it. It had very strong immagery. I'm sorry you had to go through that... I hope your life has gotten at least a little better... |
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Re: A day of Suicide
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by MaRy_JaNe_420 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 05:24:17 PM AEST
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| holy ***** thats a great poem but my doctors tell me its not normal to think like that. I realize nothing goes the way any one wants them to but try to make light if situations, I hope u of come life being a ***** BIG HUG!! |
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Re: A day of Suicide
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by waos on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:34:17 PM AEST
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It's a really good poem, but in my experience, once they get you in there, they don't give you a chance to kill yourself again. Not while you are there. There are no windows that you can get through, there are no strings long enough, and you get freaking plastic cutlery.
But your poem? Utterly beautiful and the images in it to me are wonderful and amazing. |
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Re: A day of Suicide
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by pixie on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 10:56:50 AM AEST
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wow, such a powerful write.... loved it.... takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: A day of Suicide
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by Kazzy1231 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:37:39 AM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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Re: A day of Suicide
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by MemoriesofthePAST on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:20:51 PM AEST
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love the poem..so right.. so...wow!! it amazes me out of all the times ive tried... im still here!! i hate it but that is the way it is.. its not your time ppl say.. but i dunno.. i understand the pain u feel.. do it over n over... but dont.. look back..maybe there is something to hang in there for a bit for.. well.. I love the poem and u for writing it!!
-darcii-
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