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What You Do To Me
Contributed by
baronhawk
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:25:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I lie awake, awake at night
trying hard to sleep, that simple delight
what did I see, but your sweet sweet sight.
When I finally drift away, away to space
into sweet sleep's, gentle embrace
what did I find, but your beautiful beautiful face.
When I wake up, wake up each day
what did I think, would I thought of today
nothing but you, your lovely lovely sway.
This is what you do, you do to me
all that I am, all I will ever be
I lay to you, my angel angel thee.
Copyright ©
baronhawk
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2004-07-16 15:25:14]
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Re: What You Do To Me
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by dolly_dagger on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:00:56 PM AEST
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wow what a beautiful poem. I love the fact that it's simplicity produces such a powerful and timeless message. Thank you for sharing
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Re: What You Do To Me
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:05:31 PM AEST
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Bravo! This has that sensitivity, devoid of sentimentality, that makes a great love poem. Excellent piece. It's great to read more of your work.
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Re: What You Do To Me
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by DeLeriousTearZ on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:19:15 PM AEST
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| The WorDing iS DiVine..Great work!! I bet tHe pErson yoU wrOte iT fOr feLL to TheIr KnEEz! |
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Re: What You Do To Me
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by venkat on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:44:27 AM AEST
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| Aww..this is very sweet. venkat |
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Re: What You Do To Me
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:20:58 PM AEST
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Soft, exquisite, and your heart penned this one without a doubt.
You are one of my favorite poets.
I wanted it to be longer!
Kie
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