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Do Me Harder
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:22:13 PM in AEST
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and this is so hard to do, with you gone all week after school. thoughts of you consume me, and thats all that matters. your scent left lightly on my clothes, from when you are in my arms. all i can do is pick the drift up, and dream that you are here with me. 12 more hours till the clock strikes 10:10, god i cant wait that long, seems so long without you here. the butterflys on the flowers look so beautiful, i wanna take one home with me. to resemble you, peaceful and beautiful. patterns repeating, like the look of your skin. 1 week till i can explore again, waiting is my virtue, i should thank you, for making me a better person.
this seems so easy, you on my mind. pre occupied thoughts, make my day easier. the bees are buzzing, and the sun is shining its beautiful blue again.
alarm clock rings, wake up. slip on my clothes and step outside, feel the fresh breeze move into my lungs. god has blessed me, but i feel so un deserving. the gift of music, the gift of love, and the gift of life. yet i still feel so un deserving. go through the motions of the day. then lay in my bed, and slowly fall asleep, and dream that your sweet body is next to mine.
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Re: Do Me Harder
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by slayer_015 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:25:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Do Me Harder
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:26:24 PM AEST
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| awesome poem... personally I don't think the title fits the beauty of it though... though it's awesome anyway! |
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Re: Do Me Harder
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by Daydreamer on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:44:05 PM AEST
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| its a beautiful write, so pure and innocent with no strings attatched `day` |
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Re: Do Me Harder
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by DeLeriousTearZ on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:32:00 PM AEST
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OnCe again BeAutiful wRite! The WaY yoU talK aBout LoVe...Is So ReAL! Be TalKin to Ya!
*Jo |
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Re: Do Me Harder
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:48:44 PM AEST
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| wow oh wow, def. a good job! |
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Re: Do Me Harder
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:19:01 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem...so beautiful...great work
Lots of Love
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