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a child forever unknown

Contributed by eternityandaday4u on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 02:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



No one remembers
everyone forgot
one little baby
and the joy that he brought!

four months of life
just taken away
plaese oh please
let him live one more day!

one nights mistakes
at night i cried
the day god took him
the day he died!

i questioned god
because i didn't understand
that everyone in life
is dealt a different hand!

i begged god please
trade his life for mine
if he could have lived
then life would be fine!

but god didn't listen
he took him away
without hearing my plea
just one more day!

if he would've lived
no tears would be shed
no one would hurt
he wouldn't be dead!

but the lords plans for him
they were great
god seen him suffering
so he took his lifes fate.

he took him so quickly
i couldn't say good bye
i wish my little brother knew
why he had to die!

but a child unknown
he will remain
untill they rememeber
they lived their life in vain!

so it's their fault
why god took him away
why god didn't listen when i asked
please let him live just one more day!




Copyright © eternityandaday4u ... [ 2004-07-16 14:46:12]
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Re: a child forever unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 02:54:11 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
sso sorry for your loss.
huggs, luv,
emy


Re: a child forever unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:04:32 PM AEST
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He will never know pain or suffering again. I am so terribly sorry for the loss in your life.

Rita


Re: a child forever unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:04:34 PM AEST
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eternityandaday4u

8/24/2005
I am sure your pain has lessen,but an ache in your heart will always be.
I lost a nephew at 4 months old and his parents were devestated.
My heart was broken too,but now I look back and see all of the lives this infant touched.
Doctors,nurses,family,friends and even a few strangers.
Once born we never die and God gained a new angel and your ancesters in heaven got to hold and play with him.
True it seems he may have died in vain,but who knows the mind of God ?
I bet you cannot count the lives your brother touched in the 4 months he lived.
May God bless you and all of yours in a special way.
Your anognizing poem also lets your brother touch others through you.
Always hold him dear to your heart.
a sad,but touching wonderful poem.

Sinned




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