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Lovers Lips
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:54:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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gravel is melting red, and the leafs on the trees are turning brown. breaking lines in the pavements cracks, the torn stem on the withering rose. losing blood to my head, turning pale before i hit the ocean. the fish and the dolpins cherading around this coral, like two birds whispering secrets in the Am. torn napkins at all the local restaurants, a broken neon sign, but nothing matters because all these people are happy just to be alive. butterflys on all the purple flowers, seemless destinations we didnt care, drive into the river where this water will freeze the veins in my arms. piano players playing for the audience, all the lovers lips are moving towards eachothers. and this is all something that i need, subtract the last line of the song and i need it all.
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Re: Lovers Lips
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:47:39 PM AEST
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| wow! thanks for sharing... I look forward to more of your stuff... *smiles* |
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Re: Lovers Lips
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by DeLeriousTearZ on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:10:53 PM AEST
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Awesome Imagery! grEat Work...I'll be lookin out for more of your stuff!
*Jo |
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Re: Lovers Lips
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:46:46 PM AEST
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| great job! |
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Re: Lovers Lips
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by silent_wolf_tear on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 02:10:02 AM AEST
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a great write and a very good read
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