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We All Fall Down
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:04:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sometime in life we all fall down,
Someone comes along & steals our crown,
We get dealt blows & we get back up,
Until we are exhausted & have had enough.
Then getting back up becomes quite hard,
Our feelings start to feel tarred,
Hurt comes thick &it comes fast,
Ghosts appear from our past.
Life starts to look so bleak,
When your emotions are weak,
A feather could knock you over,
When pain has got you by the shoulder.
Your once solid resistance,
Is now cracked & non existent,
As sadness has taken root inside,
It is a weed that will never die.
You feel so alone & small,
Can’t seem to recover from the fall,
Feel like everyone is your enemy,
This misery holds no remedy.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-16 12:04:23]
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Re: We All Fall Down
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:09:50 PM AEST
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| Great write :) |
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Re: We All Fall Down
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by Daydreamer on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:20:33 PM AEST
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| good write. It is sad that this disease does not have a remedy for if it did there would be less hate, lost and confussed youth out there. Maybe then we would all be able to stay on the rightious path. `Day` |
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Re: We All Fall Down
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:32:13 PM AEST
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I feel you can and will overcome this. I have you in my prayers.
Rita |
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Re: We All Fall Down
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:37:20 AM AEST
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| i liek this one good flow alot of feeling put into it thank you xgripx |
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Re: We All Fall Down
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by iluvpencils on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:30:27 PM AEST
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Great poem! It has a great message
-Claire |
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Re: We All Fall Down
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by Gentledove on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:05:54 PM AEST
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Pixie, the fight ain't over till it's over. good message here. Nicely expressed.
Gentledove |
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