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Gothic Dagger
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:50:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A floating bubble,
popped by dissillusions.
A memory faded,
erased by hallucinations.
A person that no one's seen before.
A gothic princess
with an aura of white.
A shaken can,
explodes with grief.
Who are you?
Pushed below the surface.
The princess shakes loose
of criticism.
Picks up her dagger
and slashes
the sky wide open.
All disbelief ever not
believed pours
through like a shower of tears.
Everyone wake up!!!
Your life is shattered.
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall,
and you like an idiot,
knowing the story;
sat beside him.
Down you fall into a spinning
pit of extremes.
What were you expecting??
Whipped cream?!?!
Stop reading the words
and read between the lines!
The sun isn't going to shine forever,
stop depending on Mother Nature,
use your own two feet.
The Gothic princess dressed in black-
heaven forbid she's wearing black.
Sweeps the angel off her feet
kissing her cheek tenderly.
The angel collapses into a shrew.
So small,
the full moon can't reach her.
Reminds us of a person,
that used to be you.
Pretending to be her,
when your you!!!
It's a small world get up and go look for yourself.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
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2004-07-16 11:50:08]
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Re: Gothic Dagger
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:53:38 AM AEST
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| God this is a powerfull piece of poetry, I love the humpty dumpty lines your humour and passion really made this an entertaining read and trying to read between the lines is a bloody joy, well written |
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Re: Gothic Dagger
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by DarkFey on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:21:49 PM AEST
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| Funny how no seems to know how to be who they are. Deep, cutting and perfect in its obscurity. Hats off great write!!! DarkFey |
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Re: Gothic Dagger
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:02:57 PM AEST
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| amazing write. very deep. |
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Re: Gothic Dagger
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by Sordida on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:25:45 PM AEST
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| I really enjoy this piece of writing. I really felt your angry and the meaning was deep and I just really enjoyed it. |
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