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°°°My Grave°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When i'm buried and in my grave
And time has stood still for all that i gave
In a casket underneath, without a sound
Don't be scared for me, i'm heaven bound
†
The smell of my hair, the feel of my skin
It will still be yours, even after the end
My arms crossed over my tummy to stay
You have my heart, Right where i lay
†
Your smell will linger in my casket that day
Your taste on my lips, forever to stay
You'll know when you stand before my grave
That i want you happy, on earth to stay
†
If ocean is how my dust is spread out
When i see you there, i'll lurk about
I'll let you decide how my soul should be
Whether underground, or in the ocean free
†
No tears for me babe, don't cry for my soul
I kept all your secrets, they will never be told
I'll let you see me once in your dreams
To come kiss your lips, to come set you free
†
Smiles after death, on your face i want to see
Laughter and screams, i will hear when your weak
Drops of rain i will pour upon your skin
When you dance outside, like we did back then
†
I won't keep you bound in pain and sorrow
I'll want you to move on, have a bright tomorrow
Another man's lips mine will never feel
Not even in Heaven, Your lips mine did seal
†
Your love inside me will forever flow
And i hope after my death, that you know
My words i have given softly to you
Don't shut the world out, just smile and be you
†
Passion of true love we will always keep
Even if you find another, i will know you love me
I want you to live, show the world your love
I'll help you from up high, i'll give you a shove
†
We've sealed our love with true loves kiss
Leave you never, i promised you this
When you feel lonely, just close your eyes
I'll be right their, in your heart, no lies..
†
I will not ask you to do anything for me
I wouldn't leave that burden on your soul, you see
Just be who you are, nothing more, nothing less
I don't want you living in this world, a mess
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-10-26 08:30:00]
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by Chrissylee on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 08:39:44 AM AEST
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there is so much love here in this poem could feel it al in my heart... great write.
peace, love and happy poetry |
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by Daniel on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 08:55:10 AM AEST
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| i still have no idea of what love is beyond life, cuz death downright is to eerie fer me to be writing on. furthermore, i haven't died yet, so i wuoldnt know what it's like. but this is a novel write with heart strings tugged and everything. i'm glad you wrote this, made me think. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by Lia on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 09:24:17 AM AEST
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| AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!! This is soooooooooooooooooo good!! |
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by Fwog on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 11:00:41 AM AEST
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OreO,
this is brilliant friend, I'm blown away,
you're writings are just so thought provoking
and I love them,
But this is just so beautiful,
thank you |
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 12:46:44 PM AEST
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Wow I agree this blew me away! Great poem,
& with such feeling! Christina |
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by viola on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 06:42:19 PM AEST
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| I have to agree with "blew me away". So much beauty in this. |
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by Blue on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 03:55:26 AM AEST
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this is an absolutely beautiful poem.....
thanks to you for what you wrote about mine...
but anyway, i can't say how much this poem spoke to me....
i shall keep reading your work...
good stuff...
blue |
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by Yellowrose on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 12:09:11 AM AEST
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| What can I say, You are an author born with a gold pen in your hand. Magnificent write, Yellowrose. |
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by darkeyedman on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:53:12 PM AEST
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| i really liked this. it was delightful to read one that long that had so many good lines. the idea of eternal love blended with the idea of wanting the survivor to carry on, not to change. i just really like the purpose, and the execution of your poem. made me smile. jim |
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Re: °°°My Grave°°°
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 08:36:45 AM AEST
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| wow, that is a great write. Beautiful. I love it. |
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