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Somehow
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:25:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Somehow I have to conquer my pain
Find a way to release it all
Get rid of it for good
And along the way try not to fall
I found a way to cover the pain
But it’s not good enough
Its only a type of mask
But hiding it’s too tough
You see late at night I cut my skin
Deep enough for blood to run
It takes emotional and makes it physical
But I want it to be done
I will admit I enjoy to do it
But in the end it makes things worse
It leaves me with too many scars
And I’m afraid it will end in a hearse
So you see I need something new
Something that will last longer
And not make me weaker
But stronger
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CrimsonTears
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2004-07-16 11:25:40]
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Re: Somehow
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:29:13 AM AEST
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| The way you changed the rhythm of the poem in the last verse added to the impact of your words and helps show the fragmented state of mind that people are in when goin thru this stuff |
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Re: Somehow
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:58:54 AM AEST
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You need to find strength in yourself
Its there
i promise you
took me a while to find it
it slips sometimes
but trust me
things will change as you get older
BS x
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