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A Mother's Feelings
Contributed by
Bruce
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:54:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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When a women conceives an infant
and carries it to its birth
The feelings of love inside her
are the greatest in heaven or on earth
No one but a mother
who has carried this baby within
Could describe how a mother feels
or even attempt to begin
The new emotions created
that come from having a child
Makes a mother more beautiful
and totally beguiled
Is it any wonder
if a tragedy were to occur
What this love and all these emotions
would be doing inside of her
We cannot possibly imagine
what a mother would go through
But can only hope and pray
that it would never happen to you
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-07-16 09:54:18]
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Re: A Mother's Feelings
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:55:56 AM AEST
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| the way you worded this was interesting it lends itself to the convoluted state of mind tragedies like this lead 2 |
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Re: A Mother's Feelings
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:25:02 PM AEST
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Sigh..... You have written this so well... and I am talking from experience... not the experience of actually having that child.... but I know the feelings all too well.. And after the recent loss of my sister's baby who was still-born, and who felt like my own... the pain is doubly hard....
Thank you for showing your compassion as a man thru this poem......
Jenni |
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