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Euphoric Tomorrow
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:18:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Hi, this is me, now welcome!
to the abrasions of yesterday
glint, flash, light, metal, glassss
Oh a slash while you're asleep,
a deeply bleeding gash,
a face is dripping, drooping downwards --
"Oh, how sad..."
I've never seen the back of my head, now
in back of my head,
in black of my mind,
in death, dying, DEAD,
(ooh I've sought and I find)
See my fingers do tremble,
they dance and they jive!
I'm grinning, I'm laughing, I know I'm alive!!
Hands of flesh I wield
to lift myself up and over,
and above
opressing mind...
Depressing, now no...
I am illuminated
There's no room for darkness anymore!!
Oh dear, I am ugly, I am rotting, I am torn
never
never
never
will I escape...
never
never
never...
(taunting)
See you, see me,
you are and I am
horridly decayed,
our flesh is falling from us
chunk by chunk, with slime, and our
eyes are dripping yellow-green and tongued
and rotted...
"We are nothing,
can't you see?"
Oh at you now please, let me chortle,
chuckle, snigger?
Air is in my lungs,
sun is on my face,
and yes, wind is through my hair
(fluttering, fingers)
Do you feel my grin?
Eyes are closed, oh ecstacy!!
Welcome to my euphoric tomorrrow...
I have life.
I am beautiful.
And so are you.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
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2004-07-16 00:18:29]
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Re: Euphoric Tomorrow
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by Archie on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:51:41 AM AEST
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| Nice poem with a surprising ending. I was thoroughly surprised. |
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Re: Euphoric Tomorrow
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by Asatru on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:44:15 AM AEST
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| Yes, I agree with Archie, the ending was a great one. I enjoyed the entire thing, good job. Keep writing. |
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Re: Euphoric Tomorrow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:03:04 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this revelation. It is a great write.
Rita |
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Re: Euphoric Tomorrow
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 06:31:48 PM AEST
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very good and descriptive write my dear friend. I think that the little smily face which indicates that this poem is an inspirational one has smoked a tad too much weed. Anyway good poem dude.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Euphoric Tomorrow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 04:51:29 PM AEST
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I like this one, great write
Take care
- Becca |
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