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Stream Of Blood
Contributed by
inseineangel
on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:04:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Broken pieces of a shattered Earth
Falling down
Down into a rushing stream
Pure, thck and red
A rushing stream of blood.
Dead souls walk the shores
Seeing not the crumbling world
Hearing not the horrid shreiks
Seeing only the path ahead
Led by a stream of blood.
A world of ashen hue
Dead life and live dead
Trees of blackest night
Gray world all around
Colored only by a stream of blood.
Life dying
Warm flesh turning chill
Light glinting off steel
Led by Death as he sits
Watching a stream of blood.
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inseineangel
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2004-07-15 23:04:02]
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Re: Stream Of Blood
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by Heartfilledblood on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:49:14 PM AEST
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| Your poems always amaze me. Your poems so easy to imagine. The Dead land the blood filled river. Great write. |
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Re: Stream Of Blood
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by drummerchic18 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:06:20 AM AEST
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| it gave me chills...lol. but its very good. Still very very creepy.... |
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Re: Stream Of Blood
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:38:05 AM AEST
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Wow, im getting alot of imagery here.
I can see it all.
Great write.
Phil |
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Re: Stream Of Blood
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by IncoherentGirl on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:57:26 PM AEST
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this was a great write
kep writing |
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Re: Stream Of Blood
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by IncoherentGirl on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:59:07 PM AEST
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this was very very good
keep writing |
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Re: Stream Of Blood
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:08:44 PM AEST
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absolutely amazing...i loved it...great work
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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