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As the clock ticks
Contributed by
Kirby
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:19:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm sitting here
Stareing at the clock
Wondering what time the tears are gonna stop
12 o'clock has passed
1 o'clock is gone
and now it's 2.
Could this be the end of me and you?
So many laughs we've shared
So many tears I've cried
But no matter what
I'm still in love with you
but there's nothing I can do.
If your heart is not with me
Then give mine back
I'll put it up
on the shelf where it belongs.
Never have I felt so lonely
Since I've loved you
Knowing now in your bed
It's not only you
I'm sittin here
Stareing at the clock
Wondering what time the tears are gonna stop
It's past two now.
Could this be the end of me and you?
Copyright ©
Kirby
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2004-07-15 22:19:47]
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Re: As the clock ticks
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by clowns_can_burn on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:29:45 PM AEST
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i think this is really good. it cool how you write something so deep about him, well anyway i hope things work out with yall. i am always here
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Re: As the clock ticks
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by shrunkin_fool34142316 on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:38:18 PM AEST
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| I like it....good job....especially the chorus... i hope things work out the way they r supposed to....everything happens 4 a reason....good luck.....
~Kayla~ |
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Re: As the clock ticks
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:04:36 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this..... The best to you both..
Jenni |
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Re: As the clock ticks
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by Asatru on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:03:09 AM AEST
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| You wrote this very well, I enjoyed it a lot, especially the chorus. I hope you two make it through. Keep writing. |
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Re: As the clock ticks
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:07:55 AM AEST
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Wow, i love the start of this.
Very clever.
Good luck to you.
I hope he makes the right choice.
Great write,
Phil |
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