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White Tip
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 09:19:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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walking on the beach, sun setting behind your lips. smell of cotton candy, next to the arcade. a loved couple walking there dog on the shore, they watch as the waves turn white at the tips. lips locked, and hands interlocked. tear drops roll off my cheeks, and fall to the ground. sun set looks so pretty, with the sound of the ocean.
come on, lets walk to the shore, and tell eachother the secrets we need to expose. bring a blanket, and some food. lets sit and reminice on our love we share.
moon is rising, its getting dark. light the bon fire. lets roast the marshmellows, and slip off your shoes, feel the grains of sand between your toes. ill get the blanket, wrap it around us, cheek to cheek shelterd from all the bad that goes on in this world. im falling into teenage bliss, were just perfect the way, we match like two puzzle pieces. out of all the girls your the only that fits. lets lay down and watch the sun rise again.
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Re: White Tip
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by bit0kuntry on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:40:22 PM AEST
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as I read this i thought, what a vivid wonderful imagination...I could almost hear those waves....thank you so very much. wonderful write, bit.
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Re: White Tip
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:54:22 PM AEST
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Yes...a feeling of peace and tranquillity pervaded my body while reading this......
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Re: White Tip
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:15:09 AM AEST
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vividly lovely
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Re: White Tip
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:23:46 AM AEST
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Very sweet,
Great imagery too.
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