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Barren
Contributed by
Vermillion
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 08:12:40 PM in AEST
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Barren
i hold her close and i hold her tight
i dark secret deep in the night
none shall know so none shall care
and i know that it is not fair
my wife,my beautiful and radiant wife
the only thing that gave meaning into my life
my wife is barren and cannot bear a child
so loose on the street im running wild
a daughter or son is all i need
to fulfill my life and pass on my seed
still her empty womb shall not bear
so without a care im being unfair
unfaithful and obscene again i leave
this time she follows and what does she see
me with another under the deep cover
cover of the midnight with another unaware lover
she is blinding with rage and undying madness
trying to cope with her volumes of sadness
she approaches and steps into the moonlight
in her hand glistening is a very large steak knife
she begins to stab and stab me some more
then she slits the throat of that stripper turned whore
im bleeding out onto the sidewalk
smearing the lines children drew with chalk
into her trunk to be drove away
out unto the city dumps shall be my grave
because of my coveting sins i perish to hell
as i lay in fire on my bed of nails
i look up onto earth and see my lovely wife
she has a new husband now and a new life
she brings great news of her pregnancy
but she was barren....oh wait i see
it was never her it was me all along
it looks like all this time i was wrong
wrapped in my body cast of thorns
awaiting to see the child be born
listen to me and remember my words sworn
hell hath no fury like a women scorned
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Vermillion
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Re: Barren
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 09:36:42 PM AEST
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Wow! I really liked this! But I think you meant barren* meaning empty? Either way I took baron as to be your wife, and her rage. So either way it was very verbally expressed.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Barren
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by freespirit on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 09:37:52 PM AEST
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Great poem keep up the good work
this one hit closer to home than you'll
ever know
God Bless
Freespirt |
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Re: Barren
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:37:16 PM AEST
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Wow...this really caught my attention.....especially the first two stanzas... The rest ...well it was a strange twist to what I expected....but a good write anyway...
Jenni |
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Re: Barren
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by pixie on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:52:37 AM AEST
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wow, this was an amazing write...... such a twist in the tale...
pixie xx. |
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Re: Barren
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:36:33 PM AEST
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wow again!!! this would make anybody never cheat on their spouse. this is really good. the way that u said that u were stareing up at the earth from hell , and the usual twist that u always seem to have. o the poem was beautiful. great write!!!!!!! one of the bests.
keep up the good write! i'll look forward to ur next one!
~allyson~ |
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Re: Barren
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by deadbloodyrose on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 07:11:28 PM AEST
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| amazing piece.. very strong and powerful.. the last line speaks very loud and is so very true.. wondeful work.. AMI JO |
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Re: Barren
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by Bethany on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:36:53 PM AEST
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| you have an amazing mind! love your poems! |
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Re: Barren
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 08:32:38 PM AEST
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| YES! SHE KILLED HIM! YES!! I have NO remorse for cheaters. Not a bit. awesome poem, i love seeing justice, heh. such a satisfying poem. |
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