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LOVE SICK BIRD
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:23:24 PM in AEST
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I heard a happy Lark, sing to thee
He sung his song with such voracity
That he could not help ,but fall from the Tree
That Tree was in Coventry.
The Lark fell to the muddy thick ground
Only to be chased by a bloody Hound
Frightened the poor Bird out of it's wits
It nearly, right then and there, had chicks.
The poor little Bird was in such a state
He only wanted to sing to his mate
He tried in a glorious effort to hide
But when the Hound found him, he died.
© Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
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2004-07-15 18:23:24]
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Re: LOVE SICK BIRD
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:32:26 PM AEST
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Heartwarming write.Sad ~but true.
Well done.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: LOVE SICK BIRD
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 09:09:49 PM AEST
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Awesome verse. Well done.
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Re: LOVE SICK BIRD
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 09:54:50 PM AEST
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| Oh a tragic ending but it holds much truth. |
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Re: LOVE SICK BIRD
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:12:07 PM AEST
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Awwwwwwwwww, Robert, how sad!!
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Re: LOVE SICK BIRD
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:56:44 PM AEST
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| =]] that ending wasnt so funny! |
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Re: LOVE SICK BIRD
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:51:01 PM AEST
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i was smiling all the way through, but awww.... did you have to kill him off? lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: LOVE SICK BIRD
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:11:39 AM AEST
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| This was a beutiful poem, was there a double meaning here? are you the lark perhaps... it made me think. excellent write. |
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Re: LOVE SICK BIRD
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:31:44 PM AEST
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Oh so sweet-n-sad. I'm sorry the rabbit died.
Good work, very creative.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: LOVE SICK BIRD
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 09:40:41 PM AEST
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Tragic, picturesque and action packed, a perfect metaphor.
I love it.
You've really utilized the art of poetry to its best here.
Bravo!
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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