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WHY
Contributed by
tiger_babyj
on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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YOU WONDER WHY
WE'RE DRIFTING APART
IT'S BECAUSE ANOTHER
HAS STOLEN MY HEART
HE BRIGHTENS UP
THE DARKEST ROOM
HE MAKES MY HEART
GO BOOM,BOOM,BOOM
THE LOOK IN HIS EYES
THE SMILE ON HIS FACE
OH HOW IT MAKES
MY HEART RACE
HE MAKES ME TREMBLE
WITH THE SLIGHTEST TOUCH
I WANT TO BE WITH HIM
I LOVE HIM SO MUCH
WHEN I LOOK AT HIM
THAT'S WHEN I SEE
JUST HOW HAPPY
HE MAKES ME
Copyright ©
tiger_babyj
... [
2002-10-26 06:30:00]
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Re: WHY
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 06:44:40 AM AEST
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hI tIGER-N-WELCOME!!!!!!
CAN'T wait 2 see more!!!!!!
Very good write!!!!!
PEACE, LUV-N-tIGERS,
EMY |
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Re: WHY
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 07:02:15 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..This is lovely...and easily related to....hoping to see many more..
Jenni |
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Re: WHY
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by ChristopherFriedrich on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 10:37:08 AM AEST
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| Cruel, Cruel, Cruel, but very nice write. Welcome, and keep it up! |
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Re: WHY
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 12:51:48 PM AEST
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| Welcome, And keep writing these good poems!Christina |
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Re: WHY
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:58:29 AM AEST
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| aww i really like this one, great job, its so sweet in the most unfaithful way. |
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Re: WHY
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by horseluver on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:34:03 PM AEST
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| I cannot help but see your poem from a different perspective. I am losing my best friend of 7 years to a boyfriend who tells her everything she wants to hear and gives her everything she wants. She is so caught up in him I dont exist to her anymore. I think that if she could write-your poem would be close to her own words. If you are writing this from experience-please be sure you are not hurting anyone who cares about you like she is to me. Very well written and it touched my heart. |
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