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Change Of Fate
Contributed by
AutomaticTLC
on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:22:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All I wanted,
Was someone like you,
Your perfect smile,
blonde hair that seems so thick,
When you run your precious hands though it,
They may get lost,
Your eyes of which color I have not found,
But I could stare into them until I blind,
Skin complexion was the perfect tan,
Hands that could be laced in mine,
For eternity,
Or that's what it feels like for me,
lips that kiss mine,
A body so divine,
All just a vision,
An image shown though lust,
Or is it love?
One or two,
You make the choose,
Shall you let me lust?
Let lonliness take all control,
Let me touch,
If I paid the toll,
Or let us fall deep,
fall hard into an unstraightened line,
That seems to fit us just fine,
Seems you chose lust,
As you must,
You and I are rival teams,
Never interfering with the others game.
But I do wish you luck,
And may the woman who choses you,
Be the luckiest of them all,
But I shall wait,
And pray to god,
He changes this fate.
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AutomaticTLC
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2004-07-15 16:22:25]
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Re: Change Of Fate
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by pixie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:33:31 PM AEST
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Awwww this is so sad and moving that you never got to be with this person *hugs you*
good write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Change Of Fate
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by Archie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:17:02 PM AEST
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| It seems like you are working through it. |
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Re: Change Of Fate
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:44:38 AM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
huggs,
emy |
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