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Numb
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:48:26 PM in AEST
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I’ve just become so numb
Pain is all I know
I don’t know true happiness
But I won’t let it show
I try to help so many people
But it all seems so fake
How can I help anyone
When I can’t do anything for my own sake
My life just doesn’t seem to get better
I’m not really sure why
I guess I did something wrong
Because I always seem to cry
People say I shouldn’t be sad
I’ve got a lot to live for
But I just don’t see it
I just can’t take anymore
I guess I’ll just hold on
See what happens next
My life can’t get much worse
It’s just become so perplexed
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CrimsonTears
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2004-07-15 15:48:26]
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Re: Numb
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:53:10 PM AEST
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I don't see this as complaining, but more along the lines as honest. Honesty is good there's no point in acting happy and writing about puppies, kittens, and sunshine if all you feel is darkness. Don't worry though writing poetry (i have found) can be very soothing. Keep your strength up and keep on writing. By the way I liked your poem.
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Re: Numb
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:57:13 PM AEST
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I think poetry is a form of therapy for the soul. Posting as much pain as you can just solidifies where you are at in life and sharing it with others. This is a very nice poem!Keep on releasing. Keep on writing!
angel always... godspeed...joni |
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Re: Numb
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by pixie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:24:51 PM AEST
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very good write, i find that i write better when the world looks black and grim.... great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Numb
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:16:58 AM AEST
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| Its good to get the words out - and you expresss yourself well. |
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Re: Numb
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:41:55 AM AEST
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Another upsetting write
you are good at expressing these emotions
i can relate all too well
I have the scars to prove it :)
BS x |
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