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whats wrong?
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 02:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
scifi
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I never liked my self in the beginning
filled with dark negativity
I craved
I loathed
and now the story is told by the scars
and the nails
hammered by my own heart
its in the smile in my face
the skin flakily traced
that gives me away
the happy thoughts so long ago strayed
now I’m left cold and hard
these eyes green
show a apparent blue
if someone cared they'd
understand this to be a clue
my hands weary
trembling from anticipation
my soul poured into this pen
the pain never ends
rivers running cold and clear
rivers no-one knew were here
this glass has cracked
and as the shards fall
they create a beautiful mayhem
only I know exist
I must live
a normal life
never knowing what I thrive
till I’ve lost it
till its gone
maybe then I’ll
know what’s so wrong
Copyright ©
loopylou
... [
2004-07-15 14:50:14]
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Re: whats wrong?
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by Archie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:03:13 PM AEST
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| This is a very bueatiful illustration of self struggle. I like this piece very much. |
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Re: whats wrong?
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by Ryoko on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:11:38 PM AEST
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| i like it! its dark and i love dark poetry! your very good you know, keep it up! |
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