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Dead Man Walking
Contributed by
ravenshadows
on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:52:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Worthless
Bound by the chains of humanity
To remain in this world
Suffering
The rotted flesh of my being
Stench pungently aromatizing
The halls of my soul
Searching
That god of yesterday
Filling my head with lies and hopes
Asking, leading
My innocent soul to dream of what is to come
Promising salvation, eternal life
But instead
Let the arms of death entwine
Constantly reminding all of its power
Snatching the very life force which courses through your veins
Who is your master now
As you look
Searching the faceless names and dates
Imbedded so coldly
In all those rows of stone
There is no life here in this place
Just myself
A dead man walking
Copyright ©
ravenshadows
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2004-07-15 13:52:59]
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Re: Dead Man Walking
(User Rating: 1 )
by frozenfire on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:52:51 PM AEST
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| Wow, I don't think I've read anything more powerful in my life!! This was so vivid.wow...awesome write keep it up! |
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Re: Dead Man Walking
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:35:34 PM AEST
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Very good job in expressing the depths of your soul and its journey! Keep enjoying the penned word. You do it brilliantly.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Dead Man Walking
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:02:33 AM AEST
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| Crazy good imagry and imagination. The rotted flesh aromatizing the halls of my soul...wow thats a pretty picture right there lol. I get a vague idea on the meaning behind this but I won't say what I think it is because I'm usually compleatly wrong but I like it. Thanks for reviewing Sheeps and Sleeps. |
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Re: Dead Man Walking
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 04:03:29 AM AEST
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| :) ..... i like your touch...... |
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