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YOUR EYES
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:27:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I never knew how many secrets a persons eyes could share
but your eyes pour your secrets out all to me
that way you look at me
your eyes have a gentle glow
at rare random moments when i am protected within the shield of your arms i can feel the intensity of your stare
although my own eyes are shut
your eyes tell me the secrets of what your feeling
Do my eyes tell you too?
we cant fight this forever
when we have i rare moments i know that for sure
show me all that your eyes say your feeling
i can promise you your affection will be returned
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brokensoul
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2004-07-15 13:27:56]
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by Stampede38 on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:34:03 PM AEST
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Sounds like you really have feelings for him/her.
If he/she is a trluy good friend, don't get into a physical relationship. It'll only ruin what you already have. Believe me, I know.
Anyways, good poem and kep it up. |
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:35:28 PM AEST
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The eyes can be very expressive and tell so much about a person. Very nice verse.
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Re: YOUR EYES
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by pixie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:41:02 PM AEST
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awwww maybe you should tell this person it must be eating you up inside keeping this to yourself....
pixie xx |
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