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TRAPPED IN A SPHERE
Contributed by
wellsmark
on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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TRAPPED IN A SPHERE
Trapped in a stratum a tremulous stay.
Each day my mind rambles on feathered wings,
Will I ever be able to have my say,
Or talk about the past and things?
Sipping cold water I float and think.
A fly grounds on my shade so bright,
Flight then spiral it lands in my drink,
Spinning, fighting almost pleading in plight.
Then still wings beat no more…
A black shell bobbing in a watery frontier,
Will she ever walk back through the door?
Soundless I blink a salty sphere.
Copyright ©
wellsmark
... [
2002-10-26 02:00:00]
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Re: TRAPPED IN A SPHERE
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by Chicken on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 04:41:42 AM AEST
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Re: TRAPPED IN A SPHERE
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 07:38:54 AM AEST
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I love your use of words here.. especially liked...... "Soundless I blink a salty sphere."
Jenni |
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Re: TRAPPED IN A SPHERE
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by wellsmark on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 07:06:24 PM AEST
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| Thanks glad you liked the poem |
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