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Self hate.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:15:21 PM in AEST
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A feeling of self hate
A feeling I cant excape
Haunted throughout my years
My only living fears
The fears of witch I cant describe
For the love in witch Ive been deprived
Told im nothing brought to think
Told im useless just lay to waste
No friends society I lay just another stupid face
As I seem to lose the battle my life a steady pace
The few I love they bring me joy
But myself I see a useless toy
I cant hold on to something I look back
Force my friends away that I know a fact
I say such stupid things I just seem to hurt
Uncontrolable Nothing''s feelings I cant change
My past brought up to rely on my own
No ro model there to call my own
If you say a drunk to take care is what I need
Responsibility Ha I was just getting good to read
My self-esteem blown to ***
The dreams yet not shattered my little bits
I continue to hold dear what happiness is left
For I dont want to go down the un returnable rest
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heartfilledblood
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2004-07-15 13:15:21]
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Re: Self hate.
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by pixie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:27:43 PM AEST
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Awww hun, I know exactly how you feel...... very powerful write, very sad that you do feel like this.. you are not alone..
pixie xx |
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Re: Self hate.
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:29:19 PM AEST
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ohh, dark stuff.
powerful.
strong thoughts.
very emotional.
*very good*
hang on in there!
you're poetry is awesome! |
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Re: Self hate.
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 07:04:55 PM AEST
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This is an amazing poem...i know how you feel...just hang in there....keep up the good work...i hope to read more from you.
lots of love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Self hate.
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:51:33 AM AEST
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this was alrite I thought and I could relate to it a lot. It could have been better if u had fixed some spelling errors and paid closer attention to punctuation other than that though the poem was really good.
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Re: Self hate.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:11:21 AM AEST
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sad - nice expression --
good work |
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Re: Self hate.
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:02:13 PM AEST
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'For I dont want to go down the un returnable rest' i didnt understand this..
Maybe you could explain =)
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