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Torn up image of who i was supposed to be

Contributed by frmpoison2static on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 12:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Second time around, this will be different, the walls will be broken, and my smile will be faded
underneath this curtain. with your arm around his shoulder and his hand on your thigh, somethings
just not right. what happend to 3 years ago when you were all mine? when your arm was around my shoulder and my hand was in the unkown. rapidly flashing pictures of our past enter my foggy head as i lean back and start to close my eyes. eye contact between you and me was never very good ., the book was always two pages ahead of me, the future of 18 just seemed to hold more fun, its funny how things worked out but next time this will be different..

Light fading in the backround, this vibrant picture turns to a faded grey, and this white letter turns to black infested ink.

this line is about how im over you, and how this is over.. i will always love you, and my heart will always be bigger and brighter because of you, even though this is over, your gracious prescents has made me a better person on the outside and inside of this torn up image of what i was supposed to be. your so happy with your new man, and im happy with knowing that your safe in his arms, you deserved better than me anyways.. you will be better off with him. for ever and ever i will love you.

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Re: Torn up image of who i was supposed to be (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:16:17 PM AEST
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this is amazing, brought out a lot of emotions about my ex, u put difficult emotions into beautiful words. hope life gets good for u xxx

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