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I'm Lost
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:57:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am feeling alone & quite lost,
My heart is crying & full of frost,
The love I have I am pushing away,
When all I want is for it to stay.
Life has no real meaning,
If you carry no feeling,
You won’t feel love or pain,
The numbness will drive you insane.
Please show me the way to go,
I really do need to know,
My sense of direction is blurred,
I am talking in rambles & slurs.
The path that I once knew,
Is blocked & I can’t get through,
It is filled with thorny brambles,
Over them I can’t quite scramble.
Which way is the way that is right?
I can’t see from my dark into the light,
My vision has been distorted,
& my happiness has been thwarted.
I have not been given a map,
Not been warned of this mishap,
I have never felt so isolated,
My heart has never been so desecrated.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-15 11:57:17]
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Re: I'm Lost
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by RhythmBndt on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 12:27:09 PM AEST
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| Very emotional...good write :) |
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Re: I'm Lost
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:25:07 PM AEST
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My prayers are with you, Krissy. Sometimes we need help to get back on our feet. Don't lose hope. There is help out there.
Rita |
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Re: I'm Lost
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by venkat on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:52:20 AM AEST
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Krissy..my lovely girl..don't loss your hope..
..this is so heart moving..venkat
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Re: I'm Lost
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by bernard on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 02:38:45 AM AEST
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Great poem I hope that you are not writing from personal experience 5/5 for an excellent piece of work.
bernard. |
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Re: I'm Lost
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by little_genna on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:04:50 AM AEST
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Bless u Krissy,
This is such a heart rendering poem, to know your struggling. Well hun we are here to help you get back to your feet.
Your such a talented poet! Yet i know your feeling from this poem, I myself have felt it so often in the last two years.
*hugs you*
love and peace be with you.
Gen xx |
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Re: I'm Lost
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by nemo on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 03:43:19 AM AEST
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| I really like this. I look forward to reading more. |
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