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mirror necklace
Contributed by
Ryoko
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:25:06 AM in AEST
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Eyes that are sharp, deep and clean,
Surrounded by a brilliant green,
Shards of amber within the rim,
Brown layers grown thin.
Japanese tint all over my life,
prescence, appearance, myself,
Small white bell awarding the night,
attached to a silver chain.
Deep red cuts taint my body,
White lines form forever,
Souless stones whither my mind,
Pale lifeless pentagrams are my sign.
Small innocent and dressed in red,
Curled hair and clear irises,
Embodiment of evil's five knights,
the strongest and first dead.
Jagged mirrors distort my vision,
Serious colours attack my skin,
Clear doubts directed at you,
Crystal lining tears run anew.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-07-15 05:25:06]
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Re: mirror necklace
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by Vermillion on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:07:09 AM AEST
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very deep poem,an A+ write.
thanx for sharing.
~vermillion~ |
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Re: mirror necklace
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by AngelousBlack on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:09:26 AM AEST
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| Its very deep, and Emotional. I think if you have great talent, keep up..you could become a great Poet |
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Re: mirror necklace
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 02:37:25 PM AEST
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| wow this gives of one strange vibes. made me have a eerie feeling when i read it. its good your poems can make people feel so much emotion |
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Re: mirror necklace
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by silent_wolf_tear on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:09:33 AM AEST
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this is very good, i liked reading this, a times it makes you think, thanks for sharing it
~Silent_wolf_tear |
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Re: mirror necklace
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:01:56 AM AEST
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You have so much, depth, normally I'm not fond of poems with self inflicted pain, not because I think it's stupid, but because most of the poems don't really sound like they mean the words they are made of. I don't know what you can make of that, I often don't make alot of sence but I do like your words, they are real, raw, and still you manage to make the beautiful.
Peace and Kumquats With Love
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