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Worstbest days.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
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Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:05:53 AM in AEST
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The worst day I can remember
I left you your feeling a backstab the ostrom's forever
I told you to change for I will leave
But you just thought I made just another stupid plee
Its now been 2 years
Ha ha im living your worst fear
The most embarrasing day I can remember
I puked not once but 6 times a scar I left forever
I just tried to be cool
I just looked like a stupid fool
Our mom our ro model
I guess I wasnt that much better
The best day I can remember
The happiest time I felt in forever
I can still taste your lips
I can feel the skin my hands on your hips
Life experiences lay now a meer memory
For Ill never forget the good or bad
Each locked in time
As these I feel important through time
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heartfilledblood
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2004-07-15 05:05:53]
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Re: Worstbest days.
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by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 09:15:36 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem! It was definitely very different and unique how you were able to combine your worst day, best day, happiest day, and most embarassing day all in one poem.
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Re: Worstbest days.
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:25:15 PM AEST
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this is a good poem. u made me blush just reading it. i love u and i can't wait till u get home.:D:D:D:
~allyson~ |
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Re: Worstbest days.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:59:47 PM AEST
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Keep them all vivid in your memory and when you feel a low point in life coming on revisit each and everyone and decide then which made you the happiest. Then make your decision and walk toward the one you want to live. I think you will choose 'best' everytime.
Rita |
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Re: Worstbest days.
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by longforgottenlove on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:41:17 AM AEST
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of course like all the rest this poem was amazing daric how do you do it time and time again?
much love,
april rose |
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