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Giving Up
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:28:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm giving up
Once & for all
I've wasted my love
On someone who isn't the same
I'm giving up on us
I'm giving up you
I'm giving up on everything
Most importantly, me
I'm giving up on love
I'me giving up on life
I have nothing else to live for
Without you by my side
I'll always be your friend
But never your lover again
I'll love you always & forever
Even if you don't feel the same
Copyright ©
RhythmBndt
... [
2004-07-14 22:28:39]
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Re: Giving Up
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by drummerchic18 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:10:21 PM AEST
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| this is so sad...Never give up on love...Ever..and never give up on yourself. However your release becomes your writing. Excellent write...that's truth. |
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Re: Giving Up
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:34:53 PM AEST
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Wonderful write! Please dont ever give up on yourself. Take it from me someone who knows. This was a good write you expressed your feelings well.
sMiLe!!!!!!! |
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Re: Giving Up
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by pixie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 12:19:57 PM AEST
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never give up... love will conquer all, it might just take some time thats all :) *hugs you*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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