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Stardust
Contributed by
blueheart
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:05:02 PM in AEST
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Luminious stardust,
Sprinkled 'neath the milky moon,
Sheer tranquility.
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blueheart
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2004-07-14 22:05:02]
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Re: Stardust
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:12:32 PM AEST
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What a truly beautiful haiku. This is one of the best I have read lately.
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Re: Stardust
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by wray on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:40:06 PM AEST
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| Ooh stardust, one of my favourite images. I love the contrasting textures this poem calls to mind - speckled stardust vs milky moon vs etherealness of your "sheer tranquility". Makes for very interesting, multidimensional imagery. |
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Re: Stardust
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:16:54 PM AEST
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| And this is sheer beauty..venkat |
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Re: Stardust
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by pixie on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 12:23:59 PM AEST
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beautiful haiku
pixie xx |
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Re: Stardust
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by arden on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:09:13 PM AEST
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wow this was really good. very beautiful. i really really liked it.
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Re: Stardust
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:21:01 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful Blueheart.......I can picture that so clearly in my mind's eye!
I love the last line of all "Sheer Tranquilty!
I love peaceful conditions......all the time!
Bet you do too!
Lovely Hiaku indeed!
love
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Re: Stardust
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 12:26:46 AM AEST
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| Wow! This is the shortest poem I've ever read!! hahaha... good work!! |
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Re: Stardust
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:58:34 PM AEST
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perfect and sooo beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Stardust
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:36:58 AM AEST
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Awesome!1
huggs,smiles,
emy |
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Re: Stardust
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:46:43 PM AEST
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| fantastic haiku. |
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Re: Stardust
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 09:51:11 PM AEST
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Very good haiku! You choice of words painted the picture very eloquently. Excellent piece.
Slàn
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Re: Stardust
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 12:12:52 AM AEST
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| Great title! This haiku puts such a pretty and positive image into my head! |
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