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Why Did It Come To This?
Contributed by
PieceOfABrokenSoul
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:25:07 PM in AEST
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Why did it go so far?
And leave my heart ajar?
Why did it come to this?
Leading my soul to an abyss.
Why couldn’t you put a pole through my heart?
Or even kill me with a poison dart?
Take this time and think it through.
Just know that I love you.
Why did it come to this?
That everyday my heart would miss,
That important beat,
And stumble to the deceit
I thought we could be happy.
But instead you were so angry.
Why did it come to this?
To end in that abyss?
I would say I’m sorry,
All the misery created a banshee
I would hope you aren’t leaving me
Now I question,
But I should hope it wouldn’t end in bad action
Will you save me from the abyss?
And why did it come to this?
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Re: Why Did It Come To This?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:35:29 PM AEST
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now I see why your name is "broken soul" This was well portrayed of the angst you are feeling. I wish you two luck in sorting out the "mess" and dwell not long in the depths of the abyss.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Why Did It Come To This?
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by drummerchic18 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:24:35 PM AEST
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| this seems to speak my heart as well. I have a situation on my own hands and this basically descibes my hearts feelings...I don't know whether JAckie is a friend or a bf/gf but i know in my situation we were best friends and she put a knife in my back which I would rather her have ended everything than to pretend like everything was okay. Read Enough is Enough |
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Re: Why Did It Come To This?
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:41:01 PM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot. You expressed your feelings so well. I hope everything works out.
sMiLe!!!!!!!!! |
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