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A little schizophrenic
Contributed by
gherkin
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:21:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Does she hear my heart thump
I can feel it too
Please let go, just watch me jump
You know i can't let you
It's not just your own your giving up
It's mine your wasting too
You like it here no more than me
I like it less for I can see
Through these eyes, from which you hide
And cower, threatening suicide
Why, oh why would I wish to peer
By simply listening all I hear
Sickens, tars all my insides
As they glow with their golden pride
Their taunting haunts me day and night
Their laughter ringing through my mind
Tears swell up, our world stands still
My world you live in, just until
You can tear it, rip it away from me
And once its yours, you'll run, you'll flee
Away from you, pathetic child
Your interests are dull, your humour mild
You bore me stiff with your old routine
Is that smile made out of plasticine?
Are your words a script and walk an act?
How long will you convince them of that?
Don't patronise me you incessant whinge
You smoke, you drink, a constant binge
Easy for you to critisise
As your the one who has the eyes
To look, to watch, and then to judge
Look in a mirror, what have you to begrudge?
Your right, always were, always will be, I know it
But for me to agree, come all out and admit it
Hasn't been easy, so now will you free me?
So little words, to concluded so precisely
Listen close to me, for this will not repeated
I'll be the one getting rid of you, and I don't get defeated
Copyright ©
gherkin
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2004-07-14 21:21:48]
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Re: A little schizophrenic
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by gherkin on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:48:17 PM AEST
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Sorry about the word i missed out of the second to last line. I'm sure you all know what i meant to say:
Listen close to me, for this will not be repeated.
I'll correct it if/when I get published ; ) |
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Re: A little schizophrenic
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by lonely_kakashi on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:04:04 PM AEST
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wow.....Im lost for words, i can so relate, can be frustrating having a voice in the back of your mind telling you your no good, i could go with examples but im telling me to stop being so sad! lol so ill go now!
Great poem though, wish i thought of the way you presented it! :)
Kakashi
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Re: A little schizophrenic
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by drummerchic18 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:28:45 PM AEST
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| dude, this is awesome. breathtaking and I'm in awe. I know what it's like to have that continuous pulsating in the back of ur mind saying ur are worth ***** and that u know nothing and telling you what to do and what not to do. I have so been there...your not alone |
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Re: A little schizophrenic
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by Vermillion on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:18:05 AM AEST
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now thats a kick ass poem i absolutely love how you put each voice in its on text style,Brilliant! wish i had thought of it.
keep up the great work.
~vermillion~ |
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Re: A little schizophrenic
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:41:33 AM AEST
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This was very, very good.
I can see why it's your favourite.
Once again, i love the use of words. |
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