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Candour
Contributed by
gherkin
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:46:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
political
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A single petal falls
Another life taken
It droops
We sink
Further
Deeper than before
With little time left
Panic seeps
Fear creeps
But nothing changes
Lone and forlorn
Hanging by a thread
It's gone
Nothing left to fight for
Suprised? Blamless?
Aren't you always
Copyright ©
gherkin
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2004-07-14 18:46:36]
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Re: Candour
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:55:14 PM AEST
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very well worded. very captivating to read.
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Re: Candour
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by Luinil on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 02:40:07 PM AEST
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| great poem all around* |
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