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Sonnet To Beauty
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:32:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This evening I saw day's sun-eye dip low
behind a range of silhouetted peaks.
And colors gave the sky a golden glow
with close clouds rows of multi-color streaks.
The mountains hide their pines in purple shade,
a border low to frame the picture scene.
In time all inter-mixture hues will fade
and duskingtide will wipe the canvas clean.
Your beauty's greater by far dearest Joan
than many colors painting heavens high.
For you have given me a peaceful home
a place for me where loving care doth lie.
Copyright ©
ramfire
... [
2004-07-14 18:32:09]
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Re: Sonnet To Beauty
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:56:29 PM AEST
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the way you worded this made me think. i really liked this. im lookin forward to more.
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Re: Sonnet To Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:49:41 PM AEST
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Was this written for me??? lol Just kidding!
My name is in there, your name is my astrological sign. Joni+Aries= ram fire lol
These words are poetics at its best. A great painted picture in my minds eye.
Angel always...joni 0:-) |
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Re: Sonnet To Beauty
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:25:22 PM AEST
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this was really good great job
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Re: Sonnet To Beauty
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:14:47 PM AEST
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Such a calming sense to this. Lovely.
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