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a dream and a wish
Contributed by
shorty_52
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:37:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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i had a dream
the night before last
about a boy
so far in my past.
i don't know why
i dremt that dream
he made me cry
and hurt
and scream.
he got me depressed
he cheated my heart
he messed with everyone
right from the start.
i wish we never dated
and we're still friends
but that will never happen
i won't ever trust him again.
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Re: a dream and a wish
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:45:49 PM AEST
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Trust is a hard line.Forgiveness is divine. Nice write! :-)
angel always...joni |
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Re: a dream and a wish
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 04:07:39 PM AEST
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I understand, you have just described one of my past relationships.
I'm glad i am not out of it.
Trust is hard.
Good poem, full of emothion.
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: a dream and a wish
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by mysterious15 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:01:01 PM AEST
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This is a great poem.. I felt like this about a guy once. Very good rhyme:)
Keep writing!;)
:mysterious15: |
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Re: a dream and a wish
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:31:23 PM AEST
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| Hey I Like This |
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Re: a dream and a wish
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 10:31:43 PM AEST
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I like this much, thank you for sharing.
Why is it no mater what we know, we always seem to have to see for ourselves....over and over again......but if we didn't.....how would we know. |
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