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NO ONE COMPARES
Contributed by
mlcarter369
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:11:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I SIT AT HOME AND WONDER
WHY DID I SLEEP WITH YOU
I THOUGHT WHAT WE HAD WAS LOVE
BUT I GUESS IT WASNT TRUE
I REALLY DID LIKE YOU AND
I THOUGHT YOU FELT THE SAME
BUT KNOWING THAT YOU USED ME
MAKES YOU SEEM REALLY LAME
EVEN THOUGH YOU HURT ME
I CANT GET OVER HOW I FEEL
FRIENDS TELL ME TO GET OVER YOU
TO JUST FORGET YOU AND DEAL
BUT EVERYTIME I MEET A GUY
I COMPARE HIM TO YOU
BUT THEY NEVER MATCH UP
SO ILL LOOK UNTIL THEY DO
Copyright ©
mlcarter369
... [
2004-07-14 15:11:12]
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Re: NO ONE COMPARES
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by emospaztic on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:16:45 PM AEST
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| You seem to be spoon-feeding emotion to the readers. I don't understand the all caps. I thought overall it was well written. |
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Re: NO ONE COMPARES
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:51:17 PM AEST
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Ah yes LOve ... hey good write..
Cheers Robert |
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Re: NO ONE COMPARES
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:41:50 PM AEST
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Nice write, but I too, get distracted by all the caps. This is just as well read in regular ol' print. Well done. Here's hoping your heart mends.
angel always...joni |
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