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listen to me
Contributed by
bebe20071
on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:25:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am sick of all the lies you say,
And the games you play,
All I want is for you to see,
Things weren’t working out lately,
I don’t want to hurt you,
I don’t you to hurt me,
I want things to be like before,
I want to be a happy ending,
but I can’t do it alone,
I need you to help as well,
Will you just open up,
And tell me what’s wrong,
A broken heart hurts,
And takes a long time to heal,
Put your hand with mine,
And follow my lead,
Things will be great,
Just love me back.
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bebe20071
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2004-07-14 13:25:19]
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Re: listen to me
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by kammie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:28:31 PM AEST
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it was great doesnt everyone want a happy ending but you do need someone to help you there a great poem!!
kammie xx |
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Re: listen to me
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:33:17 PM AEST
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aww this is sad.....*hugs you*
but you have written it very well,
pixie xx |
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Re: listen to me
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by Heartfilledblood on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 01:58:31 PM AEST
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| Things will be great dont worry. Time and persevearence will heal all. Im sorry how you feel. Good write :) |
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Re: listen to me
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by Asatru on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:17:35 PM AEST
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| Ah, the story of unrequited love, the story of my life. Well, we all go through it sometime (or times). But, then we meet another person who loves us just as much. Keep writing. |
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Re: listen to me
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:44:13 PM AEST
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| This Is Really Good. I Can Say You're Good Writting Poetry |
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