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Suicide
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:19:07 PM in AEST
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bite my lip till its soaked in crimson, cut my wrist so its soaked in ruby. grabbing for a bigger knife, but beneath this suicide there is angles singing to him, a melody so sweet it brings tears to my eyes, soon this body will turn to charcoal ash. scatter his ashes in his favorite places, a sweet grin and a sweet tear for this suicide, hell never know about the things that he missed, another suicide and yet just another number in this world. the brothers used to hold hands, now he is holding no ones. i wish that you could go out to the movies with us tonight, but now your dead, one gaping hole shot thru my heart.
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Re: Suicide
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:29:06 PM AEST
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such a painful heart-drenching poem! it spells clear what siucide brings to others...
sorry to hear of your tragi loss. but don't blame your self for some that he did. |
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Re: Suicide
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:48:55 PM AEST
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thats hard to bare to read. its really moving. makes me realize how glad i am to be here. just take care of youreslf, we're all going through things and we need to be there for one another.
brandon |
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Re: Suicide
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by AsILayDying on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:03:30 PM AEST
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| "Gaping hole shot through my heart".. hmm sounds like Senses Fail |
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