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Are you gonna hit me then?
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:44:50 AM in AEST
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So now what are you gonna do about me?
The look in your eyes says you hate me.
But I guess in the end you’ll do nothing.
Because your just talk, and that’s all you ever will be!
But why not prove me wrong,
As I’m making a fool out of you.
See the crowd around.
PUNCH ME THEN! No?
You little, little girl, is talk all you’ve got?
Or are you just scared I’ll smack you,
Before you fist will touch.
Gob, gob, gob! Is that all you can give?
Face me then you slut!
Or are you scared you’ll meet my fist…
Oh, you’re asking what you’ve done wrong.
Saying that there was nil done.
Saying how you’ve done nothing,
Well I’ll tell you some thing, b**ch.
I’ll tell you one little thing!
YOU GIVE IT GOB ‘COZ IT’S ALL YOU GOT!
YOU’VE GOT NOTHING ELSE BUT,
MATES THAT SUCK
SO GO PLAY HAPPY LIFE STLES,
WITH YOUR STUCK UP MATES,
AND LEAVE ME ALONE BEFORE,
I SMASH IN YOUR FACE…!!
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deathdrop
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2004-07-14 11:44:50]
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Re: Are you gonna hit me then?
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:50:36 AM AEST
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wow, full of anger ........
good poem. I can relate to feelings of anger very well, as it has caused me so many problems in my life.
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Re: Are you gonna hit me then?
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by Asatru on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:55:02 PM AEST
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| ...I like cat fights... sorry, my school always explodes with fights at the end of the year. You did this cool, same with the other one. Keep writing. |
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Re: Are you gonna hit me then?
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:26:09 PM AEST
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I'm almost afraid of your anger and rage... great job at putting your feelings down on paper... or... up on the screen...however you did it lolz
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Are you gonna hit me then?
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:18:00 PM AEST
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Anger Anger. Fighting isn't always the asnwer but it helps the anger to leave your body. I always let people hit me first but that only happen onces though. No one
ever come up to me again but I'll probably have a fight and I mite lose but I'll come again. |
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