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Trammel of Debris
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:38:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In septic tanks of wounded flesh
In prisms made of ivory fresh
A graveyard built to grow obtuse
A spectrum made to tempt, seduce
Listening to each lonely squall
Bewitched, undead but to enthral
It screams in riddles, conundrums
Searching for when death becomes
As ill-reputed devils lie
When angel in the heavens cry
To tie the noose around lament
Begin to change, regress descent
Bestow an honour to ones breath
Reveal the taboo of ones death
Shadows shroud this last enigma
Surrounding with a stolen stigma
A coil of ones ending years
Spirals down our crimson tears
This prison of felo-de-se
The trammel of the youth debris
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-07-14 10:38:17]
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Re: Trammel of Debris
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by Monkeybones99 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:12:46 PM AEST
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| Very sad and very good......Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Trammel of Debris
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:24:11 PM AEST
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beautifully well woven words, luke, love it:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Trammel of Debris
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:40:15 PM AEST
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Yeh... POW! Geez, Luke! Your mind twisted this thing into a wonderfully morbid write. Or rather... you danced right up against morbid and left it hanging there perfectly. I like this one an awful lot.
I'm rather sure I'd pay money to hear you read this one aloud!
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Re: Trammel of Debris
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by venkat on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 01:56:01 AM AEST
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| sad and chillingly beautiful..you look like a princess of dark poetry... venkat |
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