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Why are you cryin Mommy

Contributed by Justice3310 on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 04:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Mommy why do your eyez alwayz hold tears,
Mommy tell me what are your hidden fears]
Did I make you sad Mommy did I do somethin wrong,
is it because I wanted to sing our favorite song
Mommy why doesnt your face hold a smile anymore,
oh Mommy I hope soon they will find a cure
Hold my hand Mommy tell me how you feel,
tell me Mommy whats the deal
Do you have a boo-boo Mommy that wont go away,
its not rainin Mommy can we go out and play
You look tired Mommy go to sleep,
put the broom down Mommy I know how to sweep
What the doctor say Mommy are you all better,
Mommy I cant read whats in that letter
Dont cry Mommy the doctor told me you'd be okay,
he just told me to be good and always pray
I love you 2 Mommy please give me a smile,
thanks Mommy I havent seen that 4 awhile
Good night Mommy I hope you sleep well,
we got to get up early Mommy we got alot of cookies to sell
Wake up Mommy open your eyez,
look Daddy no more cries
Tell Mommy to wake up Daddy its time to go,
Mommy had cancer honey, Daddy I didnt know
How long will she be sleepin Daddy will she ever be awake,
is she in heaven Daddy did she have Gods hand to take
Nite-Nite Mommy Im glad you feel better,
you feel cold Mommy heres your favorite sweater
I love you Mommy theres no more tears,
I now know Mommy your hidden fears




Copyright © Justice3310 ... [ 2002-10-25 16:30:00]
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Re: Why are you cryin Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 09:29:57 PM AEST
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OUCH!!! This is so sad....but so full of imagery... I can feel the pain of the child.. Great write..
Jenni


Re: Why are you cryin Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Markey on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 10:33:00 PM AEST
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Deep, good write.


Re: Why are you cryin Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 10:58:24 PM AEST
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I cried, and cried and cried some more!
This was sooooooo sad & what a day to read this! My mom passed away on the 25th a year ago! I needed the cry! Great write!
Christina


Re: Why are you cryin Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 11:56:28 PM AEST
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I'm sorry I just had to read it again & again! I just love it! Christina


Re: Why are you cryin Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 07:40:03 AM AEST
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Oh Wow!
I have read this about three times and each time it brings a new set of tears to my eyes. This is so sad, but there is a joy in the innocence of the child. Pulls on my heart!
Thanks


Re: Why are you cryin Mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by mandy091706187 on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:55:05 PM AEST
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Very sad but very good write... I honestly don't know what else to say but it did bring tears to my eyes.....

-Mandy




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