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THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
Contributed by
buccaneer
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Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:50:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Rolling from the planes and dimensions of reality other than the sensible,physical world.
Death the seperation of the incorporeal part of a living person,
the soul from the physical part.
And time becomming the moving unreal reflection of eternity
I was awakened to remember
Guardian spirits to my left and right
Like in the movie theater, displays of deeds, good and bad
to other souls which have entered after death.
I saw reality due to liberation from the distraction and
inaccuracies of the physical sense
With no limitation to Learning,Vision,Hearing,Touch,Taste,and Smell
I went through the dark,black vacum with utter peace and quiet,
To the valley of the shadow of death
Now i understand the words of the old testament
"Thy dead men shall live,together with my dead body shall they arise.
Awake and sing,ye that dwell in dust: for thy dew is as the dew of herbs,
and the earth shall cast out the dead."
"And many of them that sleep in the dust of the earth shall awake,
some to everlasting life and some to shame and everlasting contempt."
Far beyond the valley of the shadow of death.
Though i fear no evil,but am hunted by the memories of
the valley of the shadow of death...
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2004-07-14 06:50:53]
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
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by Asatru on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:04:41 AM AEST
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| You write strongly and choose your words wisely. Keep writing. |
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:07:23 AM AEST
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| A good write,well done. |
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:33:36 AM AEST
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| This is an interesting write. Compare this to my poem "On the shore of the ocean" and tell me what you see |
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
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by drummerchic18 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 08:09:34 AM AEST
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| very good word usuage and placement. Excellent job. I can really feel the emotion here. |
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:54:49 AM AEST
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This is extremely sage and beautiful. You do write to the heart.
Rita |
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:56:41 AM AEST
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Keep them coming, my young friend....
Jen |
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:26:47 PM AEST
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very interesting and beautifully written great job
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:35:36 PM AEST
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'And thus i shall walk into the valley of the shadow of death and i shall fear no evil because i walk with a tincture of evil myself, i am diseased, different, i am immortal.'
As soon as i read this that popped into my head, from a novel on vampires lol
Interesting write, i love the vivid imagery and fantasy, rather inspiring also i feel the urge for something similar myself, though the only crit i would make is the structure is somewhat overwhelming at first but is quiet well shrouded by the content, good show
Best line.. 'I saw reality due to liberation from the distraction and
inaccuracies of the physical sense'
Luke
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH
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by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 05:54:44 PM AEST
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This is a great poem....i liked it alot....awesome job...im glad u liked my poem as well
Lots of Love
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